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Sitting here with my head
in my hands
Crying tears that shouldn't
have escaped
Talking to myself again
Thinking there's someone
here with me

Feeling emptiness within
Trying to replace what should
have been
Imagining a place in time
Happy with this life of mine

Sadness all around me
Seeping into my soul
Aching for attention
It's taking control
Seeking revenge on
the should have been

Psychotic with this pain
Homicidal to myself
I can't win in this life
Forever losing in this fight
Surrendering to the lies
I've lost the strength to cry
the feeling of loneliness
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Vuli9 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i really like it
and i kand of can understand what that is expressing ^^
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Lone-Ripple Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I feel with you :( (loneliness sucks! t.t)
If.. uhm I want to chat, just add me or send mail! :)
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Lone-Ripple Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Great.. bug I didnt see o.0
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:iconlone-ripple:
Lone-Ripple Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I feel with you... :(
If.. you feel like talking.. ( anyone : p ) add me ^^
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kally108 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2009
I am feeling so lonely now, I could do with this.'
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tilly22 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2009
This is amazing! <3
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hatred-lies Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
thank you very much!
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Shadowskill001 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2009
that is amazing if only mine were that good
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BasLightyear Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009
i cant say i have ever been very lonely but 'I've lost the strength to cry' really touched me
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