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Sitting here with my head
in my hands
Crying tears that shouldn't
have escaped
Talking to myself again
Thinking there's someone
here with me

Feeling emptiness within
Trying to replace what should
have been
Imagining a place in time
Happy with this life of mine

Sadness all around me
Seeping into my soul
Aching for attention
It's taking control
Seeking revenge on
the should have been

Psychotic with this pain
Homicidal to myself
I can't win in this life
Forever losing in this fight
Surrendering to the lies
I've lost the strength to cry
the feeling of loneliness
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Vuli9 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i really like it
and i kand of can understand what that is expressing ^^
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Lone-Ripple Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I feel with you :( (loneliness sucks! t.t)
If.. uhm I want to chat, just add me or send mail! :)
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Lone-Ripple Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Great.. bug I didnt see o.0
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Lone-Ripple Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I feel with you... :(
If.. you feel like talking.. ( anyone : p ) add me ^^
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kally108 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2009
I am feeling so lonely now, I could do with this.'
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tilly22 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2009
This is amazing! <3
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hatred-lies Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
thank you very much!
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Shadowskill001 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2009
that is amazing if only mine were that good
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BasLightyear Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009
i cant say i have ever been very lonely but 'I've lost the strength to cry' really touched me
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xXLemonyMelonyXx Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2009
WOAH, this is really good. I love the way the words flow. :3
Like everyone else is saying, this is exactly how i feel.
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hatred-lies Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
thanks so much, it means a lot i'm really glad you liked it!:)
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xXLemonyMelonyXx Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2009
You're welcome! I'm glad I made you happy. x33
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Dark-Angelx-X Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2008
i really like it keep going
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hatred-lies Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
thank u very much
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Dark-Angelx-X Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2008
you're welcome my dear
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Radvixen Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
this is really good. i could totally relate to this...
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Mhrock Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2008
Now I think this is so about me.
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Mhrock Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2008
Yes, it is this feeling.
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mjvictoriano Featured By Owner May 13, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
mjm... that's loneliness...
:raincloud:
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Eminina Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2008  Student Filmographer
You know exactly how I feel...it's amazing.
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ConicioInMediusRes Featured By Owner May 10, 2007
i love this, feel this way at the moment just couldnt put it into words
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Lira2001 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2007
oooh god! i really love it! it's amazing :O
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cartoonistxd Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing! It's exactly how I feel at this moment.
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starlit-sky Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2006
thats beautiful:clap:
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SockMuppet Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2006
this is excellent...i love it!! its so very true as well...
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Sahmeh Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good and I like the struction and word use :hug:
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hatred-lies Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2004  Hobbyist Writer
:D thanks a bunch! :glomp:
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